2007年7月11日水曜日

proto-portfolios

ID: 6220
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)
My favarit things
2007.04.11
178
3
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)
Campas Life
2007.05.02
250
0
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)
3rd essay - Summer Vacation-
2007.05.31
266
5
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
4th essay -Kumamoto-
2007.06.13
374
2
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
5th essay: Phantom of the Opera
2007.07.04
175
0
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)
6th essay: Restaurant
2007.07.04
244
0










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TOTALS:
1487

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

  • I think 3rd essay is best essay. Because, There is my summer vacation plan. And, long essay and a lot of comments!!

2.0. Comments

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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.05.16
13

not good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blogKumamoto
2007.06.20
43
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog
3rd essay - Summer Vacation-
2007.06.06
61
very good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays
3rd essay - Summer Vacation-
2007.05.31
61

good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.06.27
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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not quality
2.4.2. Any of your other posts
HAPPY WEDDING ANNIVERSARY
2007.05.18
7

good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007.06.27
10
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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10

not quality





* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
  • ... People write on my blog's comment what you need make paragrafs.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

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Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
31
2007.04.25
3.2. Best typing speed trial
125
2007.06.06
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials
48
5 times




4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. CatalogTitles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)Number of wordsNumbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01
The Canterville Ghost
2007.05.02
30
0
1-02
The Big Bag Mistake
2007.05.09
40
0
1-03
The purse
2007.05.14
13
0
1-04
Black mail
2007.05.16
32
0
1-05
The Winner
2007.05.16
59
0
1-06
The Well
2007.05.18
22
0
1-07
Dino's Day in London
2007.06.06
28
0
1-08
Pretty face
2007.06.12
9
0
1-09
CANDHI
2007.06.27
20
0
1-10
Leonardo Dicaprio
2007.06.30
30
0
1-11
New York Cafe
2007.07.04
18
0
1-12
Mystery in London
2007.07.10
18
0








































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TOTALS:
319

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

- I think best book reviews Dino's Day in London. Because, this book is very interesting!! And, I written little bit long.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

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Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?


5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural)


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • I have three labels. There are books, quickposts and essays.
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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • books (12)
    • quickposts (45)
    • essays (6)
    • ...
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?
    • I put on 14 pictures on my blog.
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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links---
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  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
  • I have 2 links on my blog.
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • I have 2 include other media on my blog.

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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
  • 6th essay: Restaurant. My peer says you need make paragraphs.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
  • You need make paragraphs.



7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

Some students don't make paragrafs. So, I suggestion make paragrafs for peer.

5 件のコメント:

madyu さんのコメント...

Hello Hiroko!!
I read your Portfolio. your all essays are over 100 words. I think it is very good!!

Yu-ri さんのコメント...

Hello Hiroko!! I'm Yurina!!
I think your portfolio is very useful . It is very good!!

eripopon さんのコメント...

Hi Hiroko♪
I read yours.
It's very easy to see.

kanako さんのコメント...

Hi!!Hiroko.Your poryfolio is simple, so I can see easily!!

Fumiya さんのコメント...

Hello. I looked your portfolio. You typed 125 words. Great!!