Book reivew 1-12 Mystery in London

This story is very exciting!!
I read this book, I want to go London!!
Someday, I'll go to London to see sightseeing.
If you read this book, you think so too!!

Book reivew 1-11 New York Cafe

This story is very exciting and funny.
I like it!! Sometimes a little bit scary.......
Please read it!!

Book reivew 1-10 Leonardo Dicaprio

I like Dicaprio!! He is very cool.
If you like Leonardo Dicaprio, please read this book!!
You are to do more like Dicaprio!!

Drinking!!

Last tues day, I'll go to Japanese bar with my part-time job's members!!
We went to "Hakata Iciban Dori". We ate fried chicken, takawasa, tonsoku, sarada, yakitori, pafait so on!! And, drinking!! We feel enought. We could enjoying very much!! I want to go Japanese bar with this members again!!

proto-portfolios

ID: 6220

Writing IIIc: Portfolio

1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words	Numbers of comments
Example	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.03.13	185	1
1st (introduction) April (150+ words)	My favarit things	2007.04.11	178	3
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words)	Campas Life	2007.05.02	250	0
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words)	3rd essay - Summer Vacation-	2007.05.31	266	5
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words)	4th essay -Kumamoto-	2007.06.13	374	2
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words)	5th essay: Phantom of the Opera	2007.07.04	175	0
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words)	6th essay: Restaurant	2007.07.04	244	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1487

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• I think 3rd essay is best essay. Because, There is my summer vacation plan. And, long essay and a lot of comments!!
  

2.0. Comments

---	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.05.16	13	not good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog	Kumamoto	2007.06.20	43	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog	3rd essay - Summer Vacation-	2007.06.06	61	very good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays	3rd essay - Summer Vacation-	2007.05.31	61	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.06.27	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---		not quality
2.4.2. Any of your other posts	HAPPY WEDDING ANNIVERSARY	2007.05.18	7	good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.06.27	10	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	10	not quality

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

• ... People write on my blog's comment what you need make paragrafs.
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---	Numbers of words	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial	31	2007.04.25
3.2. Best typing speed trial	125	2007.06.06
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials	48	5 times

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Number of words	Numbers of comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
1-01	The Canterville Ghost	2007.05.02	30	0
1-02	The Big Bag Mistake	2007.05.09	40	0
1-03	The purse	2007.05.14	13	0
1-04	Black mail	2007.05.16	32	0
1-05	The Winner	2007.05.16	59	0
1-06	The Well	2007.05.18	22	0
1-07	Dino's Day in London	2007.06.06	28	0
1-08	Pretty face	2007.06.12	9	0
1-09	CANDHI	2007.06.27	20	0
1-10	Leonardo Dicaprio	2007.06.30	30	0
1-11	New York Cafe	2007.07.04	18	0
1-12	Mystery in London	2007.07.10	18	0
---	---	TOTALS:	319

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

- I think best book reviews Dino's Day in London. Because, this book is very interesting!! And, I written little bit long.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?	○
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?		○
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?	○
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural)	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)	○
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? I have three labels. There are books, quickposts and essays.	---	---
Which labels, and how many posts each? books (12) quickposts (45) essays (6) ...	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?	○
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics? I put on 14 pictures on my blog.	---	---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links	---	---
How many of your posts include three (3) or more links? I have 2 links on my blog.	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts include other media? I have 2 include other media on my blog.	○	---

5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

• 6th essay: Restaurant. My peer says you need make paragraphs.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

• You need make paragraphs.
  

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

Some students don't make paragrafs. So, I suggestion make paragrafs for peer.

Good-bey ALT

Our high school ALT is go back to British when july 31.
So, we hold good-bey party on july 7!! Japanese called "Tanabata". We went to boring and eat dinner and game center!! We went to "Doma Doma" [Japanese bar]. There are free drink and free food!! Food is very dericious. We chatting, drink, eating. We were spend very good time!!
Come back again our ALT!!

6th essay: Restaurant

Restrant review

I introduce my favorite restaurant "Za Watami". There is Japanese bar. I often go to there with my friends. The places where "Kamito-ri" and "Shimoto-ri". "Za Watami" where we can feel relaxed. There have a lot of private room and some counter. There's lighting little bit dark. By grace of lighting little bit dark, we can relax and chatting with my friends long time.

There's stuff is very kind to customer. They greeted customer with open arms by saying " Welcome to Za Watami". They receive our order. Then, they get down on the floor. And, they listening to our order with smilling. We go out of there when there's stuff called us by saying " How was foods tast?" and " How was our restaurant?". Then, we chatting with there's stuff.

Now, there hold " early summer fair". Maybe, I'll go to there on this weekend. So, I want to try to eat it!!

I recommend menu are fried cheese ball, "Za Watami" salad, fried gristle, samon sushi, jiaozi and pibimpap. Food is very delicious and reasonable price. I hope that add "Tonsoku"[

Japanese called] there's menu.

I recommend drink menu are cassis orange, cassis grapefruit and kahlua milk. If you come in " Za Watami" before stuff deel coupon in front of there. You should get it!! Because, you can drink free first drink.

If you have a free time, please go to Katarai Dokoro " Za Watami ".

WATAMI

5th essay: Phantom of the Opera

I introduce movie. The title of "Phantom of the Opera". I like this movie very much!!
This movie is very exsiting and thrill story. I watched this movie when I was high school student.
Christina is very beautiful and has beautiful voice. She is Opera star. Phantom lives in Opera. He loves Christina. But, Cristina loves Raul. Cristina and Raul disided to marrie. But, Phantom disturb there's marrie. Phantom makes an enemy of everyone. So, Phantom carry off Cristina. Raul is looking for Cristina!! Fight a duel with Phantom and Raul in burial ground. Result of Raul won. So, Raul take Cristina!! Last of story, Phantom dead...
"Phantom of the Opera's casts"
Cristina is Emmy Rossum
Raul is Patrick Wilson
Phantom is Gerard Butler

Scenario, make music, production: Andrew Lloyd Webber

supervision: Joel Schumacher


Phantom of the Opera's home page: http://event.movies.yahoo.co.jp/theater/opera/intro/index.html

Havy rain!!

Today is very bad morning!! Because, today is very havy rain day!!!!!!!!!
Therefore, I was caught in a havy rain to the skin!! My jean is very wet and cald.
I hate rainny season!! Everyday, I must go to school by bus. My money is gone to bus fare.
I want to go to school by bike. I hope that will be sunny tomorrow. So, I make "Teru Teru Bo-zu" tonight!!

Cute

Last week, I and friends went to game center. Then, I tryed to UFO catcher twice!!
I wanted to charactor's strap!! The charactor is "BANAO". "BANAO" is very cute, soften.
I got "BANAO's storap"!! I'm very happy!!

Sushi !!

I and Fumi and Chinami went to "Sushi ichiba" yesterday!! " Sushi ichiba" is rotation sushi shop.
There is very cheep!! One dishie is 100 yen!! I ate samon, egg, meat, potato, Katuo so on.
I was very happy!! Very delicious. I want to go there again!!

New family!!

On Saturday, June 30. A kitten comes my house. A kitten call to us "please give me food".
So, we give food a kitten. Kitten looks very happy!! And, we disided to have a kitten as a pet.
Name is "KIKI". We call KIKI, then KIKI call "Nya-". KIKI is very cute and small!!