How to take achive success in Writing IVc

I think three steps to take achive success in Writing IVc.

First step, next year student must to have typing speed trial skill. Because, this writing class do typing speede trial. If student write over 150 words three times, the student don't have to write next class. Therefore, typing speed skill is very important.

Second step, students have to attendance every week in writing class. Because, most important thing is attendance. If students don't attendance or skip class over three times, the student can't get credit. Most important thing for student to get credit. So, attendance is important.

Third step, students has to promiss hand in homework deadline. If student don't promiss deadline to hand in homework, the student can't follow another students. And, the student may be couldn't get credit.

There are three step, I think necesally to get credit in writing class for next year student.
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Hot spring

Yesterday, I went hot spring with my mother and my grand mother. My feel was so good!! Because, I really like hot spring. After hot spring, we went to super market. At there, my glang mother bought dinner. I didn't bought there. In my grand mother house, I ate Zenzai. I like Zenzai. It was very good taste!! [34 words]

image change

On January 27, I dicided image change!! I went to hair salon. At there, cut hair and coloring and parming. My hair is short and parm, color is light color. [19 words]

With mother

On January 26, I went to downtown with my mother at afternoon. We went to TSURUYA and Itarian restrant. We ate pasta, pizza and salada, cake. My stamak is too full. But, It is very good taste. [23 words]

chinese reatrant

On January 26, I and my friends went to chainese reatrant near by KGU. Why we went to there because, there is our friend's working part time job. We ate many chainese food. Taste is very good!! After there, I and fumi went to VIP where is Karaoke. We singing about 3 hours. [26 words]

Cooking

On January 25, I went to friend's house. We went to HI hirose to bought meat, vegetable and tea. After shopping, we started cooking. Today's menu is "Buta kimuchi". We could cooking very well. Taste is very good. I want to cooking this menu again. [25 words]

go friend's house

On January 23, I went to my friend's house. First, we went to karaoke. After that, we went to video shop to rental DVD. We reatal "Shizue" and "Maiko haaaaaaan". "Maiko Haaaaaan" is very funny movie and "shizue" is little scare movie. We watched that movie eating snack and drinking sake. I could spend fun time!! [36 words]

Lunch

On January 23, I went to Yayoi-ken with Fumi. I ate syo-ga yaki teishoku. Fumi ate miso katu ni teisyoku. It was very good taste!! I ate rice 2 hai. [18 words]

Cyback

On January 21, I went to downtown and cyback with my friends. We play table pool and durts and "takkyu". Sometimes, we played game. Kind of "Taiko no tatujin" and dance dance revolution and so on. I could spend really fun time!! I want to go there again.

bowling party

Our club had bowling party on January 19. We played boeling 2 game. After that, our club member had "nabe party" in Chiemi's house. We cooked "kimuchi and Akabe nabe". It was good taste. eating and drinking!! I could spend good time. [32 words]

Bankara member

On January 18, I went to Japanese style bar with Tada san and Kuri chan. They are Bankara member. We ate a lot of foods and drink beer, cooktail, sake and soft drink. I couls spend fun time!! [26 words]

finished

On January 17, I finished 2 home works. One is "Nihon bungaku koudoku". second is "Beibunn gaku shi". After home works, My feel was so happy. But, I have home work one more. [18 words]

Karaoke

On January 16, I went to downtown with my friend. Her name is Yuri. We went to "Misudo". At there, I and Yuri ate donuts and drink coffee. we were chatted. After there, I and Yuri, Kyou, Yasuo, Sapp-i went to karaoke!! We singing about 5 hours!! I could really fun time.

With family

I went to restrant with my mother and my grand mother. We wanted to eat "tan tan men". Therefore, we went to "tan tanh men" restrant. I ate "kin goma tan tan men". It was very good taste!! I want to go there again. [25 words]

Eating

I met high school friend on January 14. Her name is Mami. I and Mami went to "Marusho" where is Japanese style bar. After there, I and Mami and another friends head for Karaoke. Very good time!! [31 words]

Coming of age day

On January 14, Today is "Coming of age day". At 6:00 am, I went to hair salon to set kimono and make up and hair set. After there, I and my family went to photo studio to took a picture. And, I went to "Shitai" to ceremony. I met many friends at there. I and my mother went to my uncle's house, my grand mother's house and my part time jop shop. They gave "oiwai" for me. I'm really happy days. [46 words]

high school member

On January 13, I met high school member and our teacher. We went to "IZAKAYA Korinji" where is Japanese style bar in Kimamoto downtown. We were chatted and ate food, drank beer, sake and so on. After there, I and some high school member went to "MISUDO". I could spend really good time!! [38 words]

Test!!

On January 11, we held speaking test. I was really narvas. But, I did do my best. [13 words]

Drinking

On January 10, I met junior high school' s friends. They are Shiho, Hikaru, Kaoru, Okamura, Wada and Ryuchin. We went to "Hakata Ichi ban dori" to eat dinner and drink. After there, we went to Karaoke at "Shidax" near by our house. We singing at 2 hours. After there, we went to Japanese style bar again. I could very fun time. [43 words]

bowling

I went to "Namuko wander city" to bowling with my club members. I could play bowling very well. I was suprised my play. ww After bowling, we went to "COCO Ichi" where is curry shop. I ate chikin curry. It was good taste!! [28 words]

New Year's party

On January 7, my part time job's member held "New Year's Party" in "UOMASA". We ate dericious food and drank beer, wine and Japanese sake. We did bingo game. I couldn't bingo. My next parson got 30.000 yen. I want it!! She gave me 1.000 yen. I'm really happy!! I could spend fun time!! [36 words]

Friend house

On January 7, I went to my friend's house. His house is near by KGU. We chatted and ate snacks and watched movie. I could spend really good time. [ 18 words]

You Me Town

I went to "you me town hikarinomori" on January 6. I went to there with my boyfriend. We looked clothes shop and food and so on. After there, we went to restrant. I could spend fun time!! [20 words]

Volley ball members

When I was junior high school student, I belonged to volley ball club. Today, we gathered at "kapri". We chatted about jnior high school and so on. We could spend really fun time!!

Happy

My boss bought many breads for me at DONQ. DONQ whwre is good taste and famous bread shop in TURUYA. At lunch time, I ate many breads. Bread is my favorite food, therefore my feel so happy. [28 words]

A Happy New Year

Today is January 1!! Therefore, A Happy New year's day~. At morning, I ate Japanese style food and zouni. After breakfast, my pearents gave me "otosidama". I feel so happy.
I went to "Tsukasa no yu" with my friend. There is good place. I recommend this hot spring.
I spend good time.

Part time job

On December 29, 30, 31, I had a part time job. Very busy and too tired days, because New Year's day comming soon!! Costomer bought "Oseci" and food. Only my lerax time is rest time. I had a hour relax time. At the time, I ate lunch and reading book. [31 words]

Dinner time

On December 28 night, I went to eat dinner "A=un" with my friends. I did not see my friends for the long time. Threfore, I really glad to met my friends. We ate many food and drink and chatted about school, love and so on. I could really fun time!! [32 words]

Go to Saga

After checked out hotel, we head for Saga to go "Tosu outlet store". I went to there for the first time. My feel was very high tention!! I watched COACH store, OZOC, IDEX, Tommy and so on. There have many stores in outlet mall. I like this place!! I want to go to there again. [36 words]

Good morning

Next morning, we went to restarant to eat breakfast in hotel. I ate bread and drink coffee. My boyfriens ate rice and miso soup and drink coffee. It is good taste. After eat breakfast, we checked out hotel. I could spend good time. [35 words]

Hotel

After "space wolrds", we went to hotel in Kurosaki. We checked in hotel at 3 pm. We put on our buggage. We went to department store and to ate dinner "Wara-Wara". "Wara-Wara" where is Japanese style bar. Good taste Japanese style bar. After eating, we went to conbini to bought snacks and juice.

Go to FUKUOKA

I went to Fukuoka with my boyfriend on December 27. We went to "space wolrds". There is very fun place. We are lucky, because there have less people on December 27. We ridden many roller coaster and ate lunch at humberber shop in there.

Go to downtown

After part time job, I went to downtown to shopping under wear and socks. I went to "aimer feel" where is under wear shop. There have very cute under wear. I bought a under wear in there.[ 25 words]

X'mas

On December 25, X'mas day!! I went to "SUTABA" with my friend. I drink coffee and ate scorn and sandwitch. there are good taste. We chatted about nowadays story. I could spend good time. But, after chatted, I have to go part time job. I didn't want to go part time job. [52 words]

X'mas eve

Today is December 24, X'mas eve!! I hsd a part time job. After part time job, I went to watched movie and ate dinner and saw night view with my boyfriend. I could spend fun time!! [26 words]

Go to MISUDO

On Decenber 20, I went to "MISUDO" with my friend. I ate 3 donuts and noodle and hot cafeaulait. My friend ate donuts and drink juice. I love "MISUDO". I want to go "MISUDO" soon. [35 words]

Go to Aso

On December 19, I went to Aso with club members. First, we went to "Aso farmland". Second, we went to good place to view star. There are very beautiful. We go back to Kumamoto city, we went to downtown to drinking and eating. We went to "Nino-Ni". The shop is "Gyo-za" shop. It is very dericious. I want to go there again!!

Mega essay Kumamoto

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	0	0	5	13	18	18/18*.2	.2
Blog posts	0	12	10	20	16	38	96	96/90*.2	.21
Words	0	532	652	1300	1520	1012	5016	5016/7500*.2	.13
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	.54

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Mega essay Kumamoto	2007/10/10		782	3	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	My draft essay	2007/10/24		513	1	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Movie essy "toy story"	2007/11/09		311	6	1	0	0
Community life 07.11.25	4th essay	2007/11/24		539	2	0	0	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	5th essay TV	2007/12/08		556	0	0	0	0
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	6th essay Learning with computer	2007/12/21		1141	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---							---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [I choose Movie essay. Because, First, I written many wards. Second, I include one link. Third, other student written many comments on my blog.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.	2007/12/12	49 words
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	tomomi's big blog: Book 2-4	2007/11/28	27 words
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Movie essy "toy story"	2007/11/14	19 words
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Movie essy "toy story"	2007/11/09	87 words
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007/11/14	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	30 words
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	4th essay	2007/11/24	16 words
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007/12/10	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	12 words

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	120 words	2007/10/10
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	179 words	2007/11/7
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	10 minutes	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	126 words	2007/10/17

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Book review The HWITE STONES	2007/12/04	20
2-02	Book review THE RANSOM OF RED CHIEF	2007/12/04	27
2-03	Book review Two Boyfriends	2007/12/04	22
2-04	Book review Mystery Girl	2007/12/04	22
2-05	Book review Hte House Of The Seven Gables	2007/12/04	25
2-06	Mystery girl	2007/01/13
2-07	The House Of The Seven Gabels	2007/01/13
2-08	Mike's Lucky Day	2007/01/13
2-09	Jennifer Lopes	2007/01/13
2-10	Star Man	2007/01/13
2-11	Leonaldo Dicaprio	2007/01/13
2-12	Halloween	2007/01/13
2-13	The Last Phot	2007/01/13
2-14	Bugs Bugs Bugs	2007/01/13
2-15	Lucky Number	2007/01/13
2-16	Six Sketches	2007/01/13
2-17	The Fifteenth Charactor	2007/01/13
2-18	The Magic Barber	2007/01/13
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [I choose best book review is "Tow Boyfriends. Why I choose this book review, because the book reviews word count is average. And, I like this story and this book's picture. Therefore, I choose this book review.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	0
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	0
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	0
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	0
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	0
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?		0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 9 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		0
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		0
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		0
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...Include picture or photos on my blog
   
2. ...Include words count
   
3. ...This semester, I didn't include other media. So, I should include other media.
   

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

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7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

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