2008年1月18日金曜日
Happy
My boss bought many breads for me at DONQ. DONQ whwre is good taste and famous bread shop in TURUYA. At lunch time, I ate many breads. Bread is my favorite food, therefore my feel so happy. [28 words]
A Happy New Year
Today is January 1!! Therefore, A Happy New year's day~. At morning, I ate Japanese style food and zouni. After breakfast, my pearents gave me "otosidama". I feel so happy.
I went to "Tsukasa no yu" with my friend. There is good place. I recommend this hot spring.
I spend good time.
I went to "Tsukasa no yu" with my friend. There is good place. I recommend this hot spring.
I spend good time.
2008年1月16日水曜日
Part time job
On December 29, 30, 31, I had a part time job. Very busy and too tired days, because New Year's day comming soon!! Costomer bought "Oseci" and food. Only my lerax time is rest time. I had a hour relax time. At the time, I ate lunch and reading book. [31 words]
Dinner time
On December 28 night, I went to eat dinner "A=un" with my friends. I did not see my friends for the long time. Threfore, I really glad to met my friends. We ate many food and drink and chatted about school, love and so on. I could really fun time!! [32 words]
Go to Saga
After checked out hotel, we head for Saga to go "Tosu outlet store". I went to there for the first time. My feel was very high tention!! I watched COACH store, OZOC, IDEX, Tommy and so on. There have many stores in outlet mall. I like this place!! I want to go to there again. [36 words]
Good morning
Next morning, we went to restarant to eat breakfast in hotel. I ate bread and drink coffee. My boyfriens ate rice and miso soup and drink coffee. It is good taste. After eat breakfast, we checked out hotel. I could spend good time. [35 words]
Hotel
After "space wolrds", we went to hotel in Kurosaki. We checked in hotel at 3 pm. We put on our buggage. We went to department store and to ate dinner "Wara-Wara". "Wara-Wara" where is Japanese style bar. Good taste Japanese style bar. After eating, we went to conbini to bought snacks and juice.
Go to FUKUOKA
I went to Fukuoka with my boyfriend on December 27. We went to "space wolrds". There is very fun place. We are lucky, because there have less people on December 27. We ridden many roller coaster and ate lunch at humberber shop in there.
Go to downtown
After part time job, I went to downtown to shopping under wear and socks. I went to "aimer feel" where is under wear shop. There have very cute under wear. I bought a under wear in there.[ 25 words]
X'mas
On December 25, X'mas day!! I went to "SUTABA" with my friend. I drink coffee and ate scorn and sandwitch. there are good taste. We chatted about nowadays story. I could spend good time. But, after chatted, I have to go part time job. I didn't want to go part time job. [52 words]
X'mas eve
Today is December 24, X'mas eve!! I hsd a part time job. After part time job, I went to watched movie and ate dinner and saw night view with my boyfriend. I could spend fun time!! [26 words]
Go to MISUDO
On Decenber 20, I went to "MISUDO" with my friend. I ate 3 donuts and noodle and hot cafeaulait. My friend ate donuts and drink juice. I love "MISUDO". I want to go "MISUDO" soon. [35 words]
Go to Aso
On December 19, I went to Aso with club members. First, we went to "Aso farmland". Second, we went to good place to view star. There are very beautiful. We go back to Kumamoto city, we went to downtown to drinking and eating. We went to "Nino-Ni". The shop is "Gyo-za" shop. It is very dericious. I want to go there again!!
2008年1月9日水曜日
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) | Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
| Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 5 | 13 | 18 | 18/18*.2 | .2 |
| Blog posts | 0 | 12 | 10 | 20 | 16 | 38 | 96 | 96/90*.2 | .21 |
| Words | 0 | 532 | 652 | 1300 | 1520 | 1012 | 5016 | 5016/7500*.2 | .13 |
| TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | .54 |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below) | 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
| Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Mega essay Kumamoto | 2007/10/10 | 782 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | My draft essay | 2007/10/24 | 513 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Movie review 07.11.11 | Movie essy "toy story" | 2007/11/09 | 311 | 6 | 1 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Community life 07.11.25 | 4th essay | 2007/11/24 | 539 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| TV in Japan 07.12.09 | 5th essay TV | 2007/12/08 | 556 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | 6th essay Learning with computer | 2007/12/21 | 1141 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Totals | --- | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [I choose Movie essay. Because, First, I written many wards. Second, I include one link. Third, other student written many comments on my blog.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics. | 2007/12/12 | 49 words | |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | tomomi's big blog: Book 2-4 | 2007/11/28 | 27 words | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Movie essy "toy story" | 2007/11/14 | 19 words | |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Movie essy "toy story" | 2007/11/09 | 87 words | |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007/11/14 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 30 words | |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 4th essay | 2007/11/24 | 16 words | |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2007/12/10 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 12 words | |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
| Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
| 3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 120 words | 2007/10/10 |
| 3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 179 words | 2007/11/7 |
| 3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 10 minutes | --- |
| 3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 126 words | 2007/10/17 |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
| 4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | Book review The HWITE STONES | 2007/12/04 | 20 | |
| 2-02 | Book review THE RANSOM OF RED CHIEF | 2007/12/04 | 27 | |
| 2-03 | Book review Two Boyfriends | 2007/12/04 | 22 | |
| 2-04 | Book review Mystery Girl | 2007/12/04 | 22 | |
| 2-05 | Book review Hte House Of The Seven Gables | 2007/12/04 | 25 | |
| 2-06 | Mystery girl | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-07 | The House Of The Seven Gabels | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-08 | Mike's Lucky Day | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-09 | Jennifer Lopes | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-10 | Star Man | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-11 | Leonaldo Dicaprio | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-12 | Halloween | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-13 | The Last Phot | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-14 | Bugs Bugs Bugs | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-15 | Lucky Number | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-16 | Six Sketches | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-17 | The Fifteenth Charactor | 2007/01/13 | ||
| 2-18 | The Magic Barber | 2007/01/13 | ||
| --- | --- | TOTALS: |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [I choose best book review is "Tow Boyfriends. Why I choose this book review, because the book reviews word count is average. And, I like this story and this book's picture. Therefore, I choose this book review.]
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | 0 | |
| 5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | 0 | |
| 5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | 0 | |
| 5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | 0 | |
| 5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | 0 | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| 0 | |
| 0 | |
| 0 | |
| 0 | |
| 0 | |
| 5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | 0 | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | 0 | |
| 0 | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | 0 | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | 0 | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...Include picture or photos on my blog
- ...Include words count
- ...This semester, I didn't include other media. So, I should include other media.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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